FALCON

My project is the Peregrine Falcon. My partner is Patricia Harding. She was supposed to make a poster. I wrote up the facts and gave them to her, but she’s been absent all week.

I decided on the subject of the falcon because I was walking home and I saw a park ranger looking up at the grain silos through binoculars. He told me they released three peregrine falcons at the cliffs, but one flew away and made a nest on the tallest silo. The falcon did this because there are pigeons around there to eat. He was very friendly and he looked perfect in his green uniform with touches of red.

I started my nature journal and asked Patricia to be my partner. Some people think Patricia Harding agreed to be my partner because I’m good in school, but Patricia doesn’t care about grades so that wasn’t the reason.

I wrote about this in my journal and it is an important part of the project as you will see. I did not ask Patricia to be my partner just because she is popular. When Patricia came to school, I didn’t like her. She knew she was special because she’s tall and everything else, but later on I could see that she had things on her mind. I decided to be friendly to her even when she was in a bad mood. If I have a daughter someday that looks like Patricia, I hope other students will help her in school. There is more to life than the way things appear. That is the first point in my journal: you have to investigate things.

I asked the Park Ranger to meet Patricia and me at the front gate of the silos. I told Patricia she had to dress different. No bare belly or shoes with her feet showing. No silver rings on her toes.

Patricia wore sneakers when we met the Ranger, but her peasant blouse wasn’t that great. I asked questions and he answered them, explaining things to Patricia. He said that in 1961 tons of feed corn were stored in the silos near the train yard for the turkey farms. It was at this time that the rock doves, also known as pigeons, became a problem.

The Ranger said they poisoned the pigeons and the chemicals killed the falcons and other birds of prey. The silos are abandoned and the turkey farms are closed, but the pigeons are still here.

He said it costs four thousand dollars to raise one falcon and release it. He wanted to keep talking to Patricia, but I decided we had enough facts from the Ranger. I wanted to gather more information from other people so we could compare and contrast.

We walked to my mom’s to organize our presentation. I wanted Patricia to meet my mother. I considered this part of our project. My mother is fifty years old and even though she’s old, she has boyfriends. She says she does nothing to encourage them. She says this all the time, but she likes the attention. My mother has problems. Sometimes she sits at the kitchen table in our apartment and cries, her hair messed up, her eyes red, but she looks good, like she’s pretending.

I planned to interview my mother with Patricia. Was my mother aware of the falcons living in town? Was she aware of her environment? I was looking at cause and effects. The turkey farmers didn’t mean to have hundreds of pigeons in town carrying diseases and making messes, but it happened.

Patricia didn’t say anything about my mother’s housekeeping. I know Patricia’s house is nice. I’ve seen it from the outside. Her mother does hair. She has a pink sign on the porch that says, “A Cut Above.” Her front yard has a flower garden and a big shiny blue ball on a pedestal.

Patricia didn’t notice that my mother left the hamster cage on the kitchen counter next to the stove. This is my mom’s way of making me clean the hamster cage. I never wanted the hamster. Loreen bought it for my mother.

I cleaned the kitchen table with a sponge and Patricia sat down. I brought out my shoe box of photographs. This was part of my preparation for the interview.

I showed Patricia the pictures of my mother holding me when I was a baby. Her bare arms around me. Then I showed her the boyfriends and the ex-husbands. They started out the same, looking okay. Then they changed, wore different clothes and suit coats and weird shirts. My mom did that. She says she dressed them better to fit their personalities. The backgrounds of the photos changed too. The different apartments where we lived. I showed her the picture of my father holding my hand when I was a little girl. His face is small and blurry. You’d need a telescope to see his eyes.

Then my mother walked in with Loreen and I hid the photos. They had been to a party and were feeling good. My mother was dressed in her yellow jacket and skirt. She calls the color, butter cream, like cake icing. Her hair was in place, but her mascara was streaked and her lipstick smeared at the edges. I could smell sweet drinks and Chinese food.

Loreen did what she always does, walked around with her hands in her leather jacket never taking her eyes off my mother. Loreen wears suede work boots. She combs her short hair down in front of her ears like pointy sideburns.

My mother cooked herself a hot dog in the toaster oven and made instant coffee using hot water from the tap. Loreen opened a window, sat on the sill, and lit a cigarette. She offered one to Patricia.

My mother introduced herself to Patricia, shook her hand. They both looked tall standing in the center of the kitchen. Then my mother talked about the new guy chasing her, how he was screwing up his life.

Loreen said he needed to be trained. My mother said he’d look good in a cowboy hat. Loreen said he needed to be more considerate of others. My mother said he ought to shave his moustache. And it went back and forth like that, Patricia listening.

Then Patricia leaned over to me and whispered, I know why you brought me here.

I thought Patricia understood things. I was sure our project was on track. I told her we had to talk in private. I led Patricia up the back stairs to the roof. I could hardly wait to tell her how great our presentation would be. We would plan together how she would tone down her appearance; make herself less of a dominant person. Different clothes and shoes. A new hairstyle. More natural. I wanted us to look good together presenting.

When we were on the roof, Patricia said, you’re so much like your mother it’s hilarious. She smiled at me like she was happy about it. My asthma was bothering me. I couldn’t breathe that good so I didn’t answer. And anyway, there are millions of reasons why that’s not true.

I turned away and looked up at the silo. I saw a white bird shoot across the sky. I pointed it out for Patricia, but she didn’t care. She went back down to the apartment to listen to my mother and Loreen.

This is what I have so far, but I’m conducting a further experiment.

Every day after school I take the hamster up to the roof and open the cage door. I sit in the shadow of the chimney so I cannot be seen and watch the hamster run around the roof. I keep my eye on the silo. My theory is, sooner or later, I’m going to get face to face with the falcon.

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Last night I dreamed the ice broke. The river thundered, floes thrust upward, and green water pushed the pieces to the ocean’s edge where the breakers shredded them.

I woke up and went to the window. The river was glazed shiny with frozen rain and quiet. I watched waves hammer the solid prow of ice that jutted out of the river’s mouth into the salt water. There was sea smoke under the dull sky on the eastern horizon and below my window the snow on the concrete boat ramp that descended down the riverbank was a hard dirty white. There was no weakness in the freeze.

Kamara knocked at my door and I let him in. He wore a tweedy brown sport coat over a blue polyester shirt decorated with a tumbling pattern of displaying peacocks as if the birds had been thrown from a great height and were falling head over heels. I had not seen Kamara since my accident more than a year ago. I was sure he had come to talk about the car. Kamara does not visit anyone without a reason. I sold him my Plymouth Volare for five hundred dollars when I left the state university where we were roommates.

“It was very hard to find you,” Kamara said.

“Not hard enough.”

“You are always this way, Billy. Funny again.”

Kamara has a west African phrasing and oddly formal English pronunciation that at one time might have been part British, part French, part East Indian, but now was something else entirely. I have that Maine turn of phrase, which is mostly no phrasing at all. In Maine, I had told Kamara once, the first person to speak aloud at any gathering is considered the idiot.

“Is this your apartment, Billy?”

I looked around and didn’t answer. I went into the kitchen and put a pot of water on the stove.

“What happened to your head, Billy?”

The scar takes up the upper right part of my skull. I stepped into the bedroom and grabbed my damaged motorcycle helmet. I threw it to him.

“Thank Allah you were wearing a helmet,” he said.

Kamara was raised a Christian and had come to this country as part of a Catholic resettlement program, but he had forgotten that I knew that. Then he remembered.

“Allah or God, it makes no difference,” he said and made a sighing sound.

I poured hot water into a teapot containing two green tea bags. I watched the wall clock for four minutes, removed the bags, poured cups for both of us, and returned to making breakfast. Green tea is supposed to lessen my headache. I can’t tell if it works.

“I am having trouble with the brakes,” he said.

I nodded and turned the gas flame up under a pan of Canadian bacon.

“It will cost three hundred dollars to fix,” he said. “To say the truth, Billy, the first time I drove the car I felt the brakes with my foot and I thought, these do not feel right to me. But I trusted you.”

The trick with Canadian bacon is to heat it gently and evenly so the meat stays moist and the smoke flavor sweetens. I worked at this while Kamara continued explaining his feelings about buying a car from a friend. Nothing I could say would stop him. When he is in this mood, he wants hard evidence that he is understood. He is bargaining to win something tangible. He will not accept only words. He has plenty of words himself and considers them worthless.

“Billy, think on this, I have driven only a few hundred miles to and from work, and it was part time work, only a few days a week. And I am not driving to job interviews because no district is hiring vocational teachers now and I have not driven harmfully or done anything that could wear down the brakes so suddenly.”

I thought, what can I do for Kamara today? And as I have been taught in rehabilitation, I outlined the problem. How can I, a brain-damaged university trained actor, the son of an alcoholic father and a suicide mother, a man who is compelled to live in a rural areas and therefore has acted professionally only in disorganized community theater groups, help a state certified vocational arts teacher who saw his father and brothers killed by RU rebels and who has never held a job other than part time retail work and who has no hope of ever finding a position in a state with limited teaching jobs, and few vocations to teach, because he is completely impossible to deal with? And as I have been taught, I simplified the problem: there are two men, financial and personal failures, each living alone. There is a car with bad brakes. I removed the bacon from the pan and put it on a paper towel on a plate and put the plate in the warm oven.

“I understand how you feel,” I said, lying, because who knew how Kamara felt? Maybe someone who had also hidden in a latrine hole and watched their family butchered, but not me. “But Kamara, let me just say that I am having some problems as a result of my accident.”

“I am sorry to hear that, but…”

I held up one finger and he stopped.

“Kamara, we have talked many times about our cultural differences.”

His eyes burned with excitement. He wanted to tell me something about cultural differences and it frustrated him to have to wait for me to finish whatever nonsense I was going to say before he could speak.

“I have symptoms,” I said. “I have inappropriate emotional responses. A radio commercial can make me cry. I am not always able to tell memory from imagination. My dreams seem real to me and my decision making sucks incredibly. I have a loneliness and emptiness that immobilizes me.”

I was done. Kamara burst into words, they spouted out of him like a geyser. They were about cars and brakes and the proper buying and selling of large items such as cars and the cultural responsibility of the seller in all that buying and selling.

I scrambled eight eggs in the pan with butter. I placed them on a plate in the warm oven. I put on my jacket and walked outside. Kamara followed me, talking.

I opened the driver’s side door of the Plymouth and slid behind the steering wheel. I left the door open and made a show of stomping the brakes. After a moment, Kamara slid in the passenger seat, leaving his side door open. I gestured for the keys and he handed them to me. I put the keys in the ignition. I played with the emergency brake: pulled it off and then on and then off. I started the car. Kamara looked at me. I slammed the car into drive and accelerated forward. The car doors slammed shut. Kamara clawed at my right arm. Pounded at my head with balled fists. I drove down the boat ramp, bumped hard onto the ice, and roared out a hundred yards into the center of the frozen river.

I slammed on the brakes and the car spun a half-circle. I turned the car off. Kamara was holding the bottom of his seat with both hands. Some time passed.

I said, “The woman that hit me, she called to tell me she was sorry. She has nightmares about it. She wanted me to know about her nightmares. The accident was not my fault, but I feel like it was. Why am I like this, Kamara?”

He was silent, staring at the shore. I got out and stood on the ice. Kamara got out very slowly. He looked solemn. He took little skating steps toward the riverbank.

I walked up alongside him. Halfway to shore, he said, “Why would you do such a crazy thing, Billy? What is the matter with you?”

“That’s what I just asked you,” I said. “We’ll come back for the car later. We’ll drive to Bangor. I want to buy one of those peacock shirts.”

He pushed me. I ended up on my ass on the ice and I fell back with my arms outstretched. He laughed at me. I laughed back like an old roommate laughs, stupid with history. Then I felt the cold through my jeans.

I walked back to my apartment and Kamara followed. I served him breakfast at the table near the window with a view of the river. He dipped buttered toast in his scrambled eggs and drank tea. I ate sitting across from him, and for a moment I felt like crying, but as I have been taught, I controlled my emotions. The Plymouth looked handsome on the ice with its grill pointed upriver.

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I need to take a moment to note the passing of one of America’s greatest writers: John Updike. When I first started to read his novels, I could not understand his concerns. Why was he writing about these well-off middle class people? His characters had affairs and the affairs were known and these known transgressions seemed too light. What was at stake? Would the children go without food? Would the husband lose his job? I was from a different class and a different world. I respected his writing. His style and insight and description were amazing. I knew I was reading the work of a brilliant man. But in the end, so what?

I made a decision to respect this genius writer, but I didn’t like his work. He writes about the east. I am from the west. He writes about the upper middle class. I am from the edge of the middle class: the bottom is right there where I can touch it with my toes.

Then something changed. I was traveling north into Oregon with a family of migrant workers, picking fruit, writing, taking photographs, and living in my 1972 Nova. >>>>Read more…

The publisher, producer, editor, and executive director Daren Wang has done great things for writers and writing. The link on his name above will provide you with his biography in detail. He started the first audio literary magazine VERB, has produced hundreds of recorded interviews with important authors, most recently as producer of the radio show “Spoken Word”, and he is also the Executive Director of The Decatur Book Festival. (This year’s dates are 8.29.08-08.31.08).

Each quarter a new VERB is released. Volume 2 Issue 2 is presently out and the last three issues are available on the University of Georgia Press site. The issues are also available as a download on audible.com. I know what it takes to produce two audio books containing two CD’s of original writing, performance, and music. Daren Wang is putting out four audio books like this a year and the quality is high. This new issue has a music piece performed by Hem and composed by Dan Meese from the album “Funeral Cloud” that is beautiful and haunting. >>>>Read more…

I highly recommend the biography of Archbishop Jean Baptiste Lamy (1814-1888) by Paul Horgan. “Lamy of Sante Fe” won the Pulitzer Prize in 1975 and is one of the great standards of American non-fiction. I was drawn to the book because I came across Paul Horgan’s short stories in a number of fiction anthologies. >>>>Read more…

A recent survey concluded that Americans read books for a reason, that is, that even readers of romance fiction or mystery fiction report that they read to learn about things like foreign locales, police procedures, etc. Okay, then.

The following paragraph is from the short story “An Outpost of Progress” by Joseph Conrad. It is in the anthology “Short Story Masterpieces” edited by Robert Penn Warren and Albert Erskine. It has 36 tremendous stories and cost me a dollar used on amazon.com.

This paragraph comes late in the story. Two white men working for a British corporation at a trading station in Africa find that their assistant Makola has sold their workers and families into slavery in order to obtain the ivory the corporation seeks. The paragraph is describing what happened the day after they confronted Makola, but have done nothing to rescue the newly enslaved workers or to report the kidnappings. The ivory, after all, means that the men have been successful. The two men are named Kayerts and Carlier. Gobila is the leader of the village nearest to the outpost.

“At midday they made a hearty meal. Kayerts sighed from time to time. Whenever they mentioned Makola’s name they always added to it an opprobrious epithet. It eased their conscience. Makola gave himself a half-holiday, and bathed his children in the river. No one from Gobila’s village came near the station that day. No one came the next day, and the next, nor for a whole week. Gobila’s people might have been dead and buried for any sign of life they gave. But they were only mourning for those they had lost by the witchcraft of the white men, who had brought wicked people into their country. The wicked people were gone, but fear remained. Fear always remains. A man may destroy everything within himself, love and hate and belief, and even doubt; >>>>Read more…

The first day of class Mr. Elkin had walked in limping and sat down behind the front desk. He was uncomfortable in the chair. He introduced himself and then said, “I joined the Army when I was much older than your usual recruit.” He eyeballed the class. I had seen him read his fiction so I knew he was a tremendous performer. I thought, “Uh-oh, a tough guy, we’re gonna get blasted.” Then he said, “It was the biggest mistake of my life.” >>>>Read more…

Last week we recorded and edited the last short story for the new audio collection “Wayside Cross” – one year after we recorded the first voice for the project. We now have to add the final effects, record the music, and mix. The covers and inserts will be completed and then the master will go to the manufacturing house. If everything goes well with that and their shipping department gets it back to us okay, we will be done. It will be time for the release party and time to forget about how we got it done. Time to welcome the amnesia.

What famous writer said he hated writing, but loved having written? Producing is like that.

There is a line that is repeated in the movie “Shakespeare In Love.” The stage manager/producer is being threatened by his creditors. He assures them he will have the money to pay them when the show goes on stage. But the thugs know that the playwright is missing and the actors have no script. The stage manager says, the show will open as planned. When they ask him, how? He says, I don’t know.

It’s not that producing or directing a performance that involves actors and technicians is especially courageous. >>>>Read more…